While Le Petit Prince (The Little Prince) written by Antoine De Saint-Exupéry in 1943 now has over 300 translations in different languages worldwide and is now considered the world’s most translated book (not counting religious works), there have been surprisingly only two translations of his book in the Philippines (Filipino and Bicol). El Diutay Principe is only the third edition featuring a Philippine language. The Little Prince is a classic French novella about a pilot who gets stranded in the desert after a plane crash and encounters a little fellow who asks him to draw a sheep for him. Through the course of their meeting, the pilot rediscovers the true meaning of life and what people should value the most. When I came across the book in 2013, I found that I could relate very well to the negative image given to “growing up” in the book. When the idea to translate the book into my mother tongue was presented to me, I didn’t think twice. I thought, ‘a lot of people my ...
Here are the original lyrics of the song Porque by Maldita as well as a rough Spanish translation below.
Original Chabacano Version:
Solo-solo na mi cuarto
Hinde ta puede dormi
Vira-vira na cabeza
El dolor yo ya senti
Por que pa contigo yo ya quiere?
Como bula lang tu ya perde
Por que contigo yo ya escoge?
Ahora mi corazon ta sufri
Bien simple lang yo ta pedi
Era senti tu el cosa yo ya senti
Ta pedi milagro, vira'l tiempo
El mali hace derecho
Na de mio rezo ta pedi yo
Era olvida yo contigo
Todo-todo yo ya dale
Ahora ta arrepenti
Sobra-sobra el dolencia
Tormento para vivi
Por que pa contigo yo ya quiere?
Como bula lang tu ya perde
Por que contigo yo ya escoge?
Ahora mi corazon ta sufri
Bien simple lang yo ta pedi
Era senti tu el cosa yo ya senti
Ta pedi milagro, vira'l tiempo
El mali hace derecho
Na de mio rezo ta pedi yo
Era olvida yo contigo
No tu distorba
Y no atraca kay baka
palmadea yo contigo
Nunca acepta
Si tu ay vira por el dolor ya senti
Por que contigo yo ya escoge?
Ahora mi corazon ta sufri
Bien simple lang yo ta pedi
Era senti tu el cosa yo ya senti
Por que contigo yo ya escoge?
Ahora mi corazon ta sufri
Bien simple lang yo ta pedi
Era senti tu el cosa yo ya senti
Ta pedi milagro, vira'l tiempo
El mali hace derecho
Na de mio rezo ta pedi yo
Era olvida yo contigo
Por que contigo yo ya escoge?
Ahora mi corazon ta sufri
*Spelling edited to conform with the prescribed Chabacano orthography
Translated Spanish Version:
Doy vueltas en mi cama
Me cuesta tanto dormir
Me pregunto a mí mismo
Donde yo me equivoqué
Donde yo me equivoqué
¿Por qué me enamoré de ti?
Si como un rayo te fuiste de mí
¿Por qué yo te escogí?
Ahora mi corazon sufre
Lo que deseo es muy simple
Que sientas lo que yo sentí
Pido un milagro que el tiempo atrase
Que sea justo el mal
En mis rezos, yo pido
Que yo te olvide por siempre
Te entregue todo hasta el alma
Ahora lo arrepiento
Ahora lo arrepiento
Me has hecho mucho daño
Ya no quiero vivir
Ya no quiero vivir
¿Por qué me enamoré de ti?
Si como un rayo te fuiste de mí
¿Por qué yo te escogí?
Ahora mi corazon sufre
Lo que deseo es muy simple
Que sientas lo que yo sentí
Pido un milagro que el tiempo atrase
Que sea justo el mal
En mis rezos, yo pido
Que yo te olvide por siempre
No me estorbes ni me acerques
Podria darte una bofetada
Nunca te aceptaré
Si regresas a mi
Por el dolor que yo sentí
¿Por qué yo te escogí?
Ahora mi corazon sufre
Lo que deseo es muy simple
Que sientas lo que yo sentí
¿Por qué yo te escogí?
Ahora mi corazon sufre
Lo que deseo es muy simple
Que sientas lo que yo sentí
Pido un milagro que el tiempo atrase
Que sea justo el mal
En mis rezos, yo pido
Que yo te olvide por siempre
¿Por qué yo te escogí?
Ahora mi corazon sufre
Just a disclaimer, my Spanish is not that good so the translation above might not be that accurate and will definitely sound unnatural to native Spanish speakers. 😛
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Have this song translated in proper Spanish it will sell like hotcakes in Spanish speaking countries
ReplyDeleteTranslate the song to proper Spanish and this will sell like hot cakes in Spanish speaking countries
ReplyDeleteThe first line should read "Estoy sola en mi cuarto" since the singer is a girl... haven't read the rest tinamad na agad ako first line pa lang mali na... jejejeje
ReplyDeleteA few suggestions: Please use bofetada or cachetada instead of palmada in "Podria darte una palmada" (palmada can be used to translate "slap" but if it is a slap in the face, bofetada or cachetada is more commonly used)
ReplyDeleteAlso I believe aserque in "No me estorbes ni me aserque" is a misspelling . Should it be "acerques" from acercarse? The original word "atracar" in Chabacano seems out of context if used untranslated in Spanish. It should also end with an "s" since it is in the second person familiar form.
I won't pretend that I understand Chabacano perfectly, so I won't correct your interpretation of the song, just a few words here and there. However there are some portions that I wanted to clarify. In Chabacano does "Hindi ta puede dormi" mean "I still can't sleep." or just "I can't sleep."? Relying on my Tagalog, it seems to me that It's closer to "Hindi ako makatulog." than to "Hindi pa rin ako makatulog." in which case "todavía" is not required.
I also noticed you used "yo" quite often. Please remember that subject pronouns in Spanish are generally used only for emphasis and to avoid ambiguity.
Just my two cents...
Thanks for the corrections! I really appreciate it.
ReplyDeletecan i have the translation in tagalog??literally?? thank you :)
ReplyDeleteI'll try to come up with a Tagalog translation for you. :D
ReplyDeleteyey asan na
DeleteNASAAN NA
DeleteEstoy de acuerdo con El Somnoliento, el pronombre nominativo <<yo>> se usa con exceso en la versión traducida. Asimismo, la última linea de la cuarta estrofa debería ser Ahora ya me arrepiento..
ReplyDeleteJPS
No hace falta traducirlo. Cualquier hispanohablante lo puede entender, si no un 100/100, con la melancolía de la voz, las palabras comunes y el contenido de este tipo de canciones, entiende lo suficiente para poder apreciarlo y soñar con ella. De vez en cuando se oyen en radio y TV canciones en italiano o en portugués, aunque se entienden a medias.
ReplyDeleteLo que sí necesitaría es una producción más profesional y, naturalmente una publicidad adecuada (nicho de mercado, promoción...etc)
Buena suerte a esta caviteña.
Quien sabe..., tal vez puedan algún día equipararse a los Panchos, esos neoyorquinos de todas partes (incluso una ¡sefardita!) que arrasaron el mundo hispanohablante allí por donde pasaron. Incluida Filipinas
Sr Jerome,
ReplyDeleteCould you correct my attempt at composing a Chavacano rap song, shown below? It is dedicated to all the gallant Chavacanistas and Hispanistas like you who have assiduously applied themselves to maintaining our unique culture.
Please use the rap any way you please, if it is good enough. I'd be happy to see it as a featured post on your wonderful blog, and since you will have edited it, you can claim co-authorship!
Here it is:
TITLE and REFRAIN "Hindi Conyo, Chavacano Yo"
Hindi conyo, Chavacano yo
Hindi conyo, Chavacano yo
No yo accusa como elitista
Ta tiene orgullo, pero no arrogancia
Ta ama bien nuestra cultura
Pero ta respeto cultura de otra
Yo de familia no muy rica
Ta estudia na escuela publica
Pero ta conosce escritura y historia
Yo iqual de Atenista
No hay solo una clase de belleza
Hindi necessita blanca o mestiza
Porque no puede Maria Clara
Ser morena y bonita
Con todos ustedes saludos y respeto
Con Ilocanos, Pampanguenyos, Tagalos, Bicolanos
Con todos ustedes saludos y respeto
Con Visayas, Moros, tambien Chinitos
Con todos vosotros amistoso abrazos
Chabacanos Cavitenyos y Ternatenyos, tambien ancianos ta vive Ermitenyos
Nisotros todos compatriotas y hermanos
Nisotros todos verdaderos Filipinos
Muchas gracias,
El Ilocano
no need to translate this in "proper" Spanish because the song is Chavacano. a different language though it might have evolved from the Spanish language.
ReplyDeleteHi guys! Sorry to not be familiar with this, but may I ask what is the Chavacano language? Where is it spoken in the Philippines? Do people who are native Chavacano understand Spanish spoken in Europe? Also is Chavacano learned in Philippine schools? Thank you very much..
ReplyDeleteHi Anonymous. The Chavacano language is a Spanish creole. It is the only Spanish creole language in Asia and one of the oldest in the world. The Zamboangueno variant is spoken mainly in Zamboanga city and Basilan. No, I wouldn't say that Spanish and Chavacano are mutually intelligible. Yes, the language is taught in school (although they started this just a few years ago). Thanks for your interest in our language. :)
DeleteIt is interesting to note that this creole has alot of simmilarities with the indo-portuguese creoles, specially the indo-malaio-portuguese from Malaca, Papiá Kristang, and Macau, Papiaçám. It looks evident that Chavacano, specially the Ternateño was inspired in the portuguese creoles in Asia not the ones in Africa or in the Americas. The fact that is contains so much malay it is also an indication for it. It should be interesting to investigat if the Filipines received catholic refugees from Malaca and Indonesia as the Dutch invaded the Malaca, Macassar and the Molucas. It is known that the portuguese population of Macassar fleed as the Dutch invaded, just a small number of people arrived in East-Timor, they were called Malaqueiros, so many others may have gone to the Filipines. This happened during the Personal Crown Union of Portugal and Spain (1580-1640). Back then Dutch were vary mean to any Catholic they would find, the enslaved them.
Deleteversion en castellano filipino.
ReplyDeletehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ui-ubLU7pRM